First, either normal 2G phone or smartphone have a electron wave, smartphone has way more electron waves so, it is not good for out health and even your head, brain. In 2011, International Agency for Research on Cancer has noticed toat phone use can cause cancer because of electron waves.
And then, it bother students from studying. Almost all smartphone users play games, Kakao talk or Kakao story. Some students do not turn off the phone in academy or whin they are studying. And when they were using Kakao talk, the sound of announcment that means Kakao talk arrived can be heard.
People will ask about researching in Internet. Of course in smartphone you can research in Internet. But, you can ask teacher or find book or when you are looking for words you can find dictionary(book) or dictionary in the normal phone.
Some say that Kakao talk is good source for free text message but it will distract you from studying. Friends will send you a Kakao talk and you will think you want to see what they sent you.
For these reasons, I think smartphone should be banned for at least elementry school. For the students of childrens health banning the smartphone is important.
People will ask about researching in Internet. Of course in smartphone you can research in Internet. But, you can ask teacher or find book or when you are looking for words you can find dictionary(book) or dictionary in the normal phone.
Some say that Kakao talk is good source for free text message but it will distract you from studying. Friends will send you a Kakao talk and you will think you want to see what they sent you.
For these reasons, I think smartphone should be banned for at least elementry school. For the students of childrens health banning the smartphone is important.
Chaeyeon,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good essay but it is too short. It should be 500 words. You also need to include links the evidence you mention in your essay. Next time please spell check your paper as well before posting it.