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Thursday, January 10, 2013

My own ode - Dear Sky

Dear sky,
How blue and bright you are.
Hugging clouds. Looking down at people.
You're kindhearted.

Sometimes you are sweet.
Sometimes you are sad.
Sometimes you are angry
And sometimes you are happy.

When you overlook colorful flowers.
And then you smile a bright smile.
Making a breeze passing through the leaves.
Today is April 5th.

When you become sad, you were crying over month.
Dropping your sad tears.
When you are sad kids are sad, too.
Today is June 29th.
When you are angry, you roar.
Roaring loud.
Sometimes you make lights, that are very scary.
People will be very scared of you when you are angry.

But sometimes you make people happy with nice wind.
You're a powerful, kindhearted, and devoted friend.
Don't be too angree or sad.
I am your freind.
                              Your eternal friend, chae yeon Lee 

2 comments:

  1. Chaeyeon,

    What a great job you have done on this ode. It is very well-wrtitten. There is one spelling mistake- Angree should be angry. Keep up the great work!

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  2. Hi!
    A really nice ode to the sky! I greatly enjoyed reading your ode. You succeeded in touching many different aspects of the sky. Good job~~

    -Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)

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